Sunday, September 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This weeks SIX is from FLESH WOUNDS, my first ever mainstream, contemporary romance. Yep, that's right, no vampires anywhere!! Let's hope I survive! LOL!

Adult Content!
    She pushed him back onto the bed and crawled on top of his already stiffened body. Stroking the length of him, she ran her thump over the tip and slicked his seeping juices down the shaft.
    Dylan bristled as she took him into her mouth. “Oh shit,” he swore out load. Only she could make him cuss in the throes of passion.
    Tangling her hair in his hands, she bobbed her head up and down, electricity scattered across his body, making him throb inside her mouth on the verge of exploding.
Flesh Wounds will be available Sept. 15th

9 comments:

  1. Damn, I have to adjust my hard-on, excuse me, LOL. What a H-O-T Six!

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  2. Nice Six Robin congrats on the novel

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  3. Poor, Ray! So sorry to torture you! ;-)
    Rawiya, thank you and thanks for coming by!! :-)

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  4. *fans self* Hot! beautiful cover too :)

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  5. Hot, hot, HOT! Congrats on the upcoming release!

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  6. I really liked the passion in this, but I had one small problem with the last sentence. The present participle phrase that opens it describes your subject (she), which implies she tangled his hands in her hair when I think you meant he did it to her. Because I'm not sure I can visualize her tangling her own hair into his hands when she's blowing him.

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  7. Hmm! Sorry about that confusion, Vivien. I may revise the sentence when final galley comes back. It made sense to me, but I will do whatever I can to prevent readers from being confused. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. :-)

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