Saturday, September 17, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hello all!! 
This week's SSS is all about the conflict... nothing spices up a relationship like the the sizzle of a good old fashions argument... Revenge may be best served cold,  but make up sex is always best served...HOT!



"Understand? Are you kidding me?" The worrisome pinch on his face from before transformed and his jaw clenched rigid. He was no longer concerned, he was angry.
"I'm sorry."
"No, you're not!" he boomed. "This is classic Jules."
(sorry, guys, I had to go over one teensy-weensy sentence...but it was only ONE word) Hope you all...ahem, "UNDERSTAND"! LOL!



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15 comments:

  1. OUCH- sounds like Jules is in for it...wonder what that will be?
    Great 6

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  2. LOL! Hmm, she'll probably get more than she bargained for! Hehehe!

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  3. Very nice Six! Not sure this is going the way Jules wants...

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  4. Vedry nice Six... Jules' in for a surprise.

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  5. well established conflict and well executed dialogue. nice six!
    Liz

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  6. LOL! You're forgiven for going over!! LOL!! Great excerpt!

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  7. A great 7! lol Totally worth the extra "sentence".

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  8. I like how his expression shifts! Great seven! :)

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  9. Great job! Love the intensity and his obvious anger.

    Awesome!
    SammyJo

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  10. Loved it and want to know more. Well done, Robin. You intrigued me!

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  11. Nice Six...I wish you could've gone over a few more lines because I'm dying to know Jules response :)

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  12. Nice six, honey! And I agree with the other commenters - I want to know more!

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  13. Great hook, Robin! Makes me want more. Bet you planned it that way.
    ~J.D.

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  14. Love how you wrote the description of his anger.

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